diff --git a/src/content/docs/factories/index.mdx b/src/content/docs/factories/index.mdx
index 6fab7c08d..f8e232955 100644
--- a/src/content/docs/factories/index.mdx
+++ b/src/content/docs/factories/index.mdx
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 ---
 title: Warp Factories overview
 description: >-
-  Warp Factories turns issues, tickets, and Slack requests into reviewed pull
-  requests with teams of cloud agents, while people approve specs and merges.
+  Warp Factories is a platform for running a software factory: a team of cloud
+  agents that turns work from issues, tickets, and Slack into pull requests.
 sidebar:
   label: "Overview"
 ---
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ import { VARS } from '@data/vars';
 import { CardGrid, LinkCard } from '@astrojs/starlight/components';
 import VideoEmbed from '@components/VideoEmbed.astro';
 
-A factory is a team of cloud agents attached to a set of repositories. It takes work from Slack, GitHub, Linear, or Jira through triage, spec, implementation, and review, and returns the result, usually a pull request, where the work started.
+Warp Factories is a platform for running a software factory: a team of cloud agents attached to a set of repositories. It takes work from Slack, GitHub, Linear, or Jira through triage, spec, implementation, and review, and returns the result, usually a pull request, where the work started.
 
 <CardGrid>
   <LinkCard