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 title: Measure and improve a factory
 description: >-
-  Read factory activity and cost metrics, then find where to configure
-  Scorers, Self-improvement, and Benchmarks.
+  Measure coding agent ROI in a factory with merged PRs, autonomy, PR cycle
+  time, and cost per PR, then set up Scorers, Benchmarks, and Self-improvement.
 sidebar:
   label: "Overview"
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-Warp Factories tracks what your factory produces and how well it performs, so you can spot a problem, test a fix, and decide whether to keep it.
+Warp Factories tracks what your factory's agents merge, how much of that work needed a human, and what it costs. Use these numbers to judge the return on your coding agents, test a configuration change, and decide whether to keep it.
 
 | Feature | What it tells you |
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